Really great work, and very cool concept. Thanks for the shark shout out - definitely a "real fear!"
The one issue I have is that some of the images you chose dont flow - a few are hand-drawn, with a purposeful goofy style. However, a few others have clean lines and look more like expertly crafted graphics. I think if you went with all of one or the other, you'd be spot on!
I like it!! I am not at all bothered by the mixture of hand-drawing and sophisticated graphics -- I think it adds interest. The only graphic that I don't get is the food (fear prompted by continuing changes on what foods are safe/good for you?) I especially like the colors.
My only suggestion is that you put the title of the work either on front at top or on the back of the shirt (probably back)to give context.
i like it. i think it came out nice! the hand-drawing makes it a bit whimsical, which works well for a tshirt. perhaps putting 'fears 101' on the bottom in a large creepy-looking font would bring it all together.
I like it! I do think it would add something though if you put on the title because with such random categories it can be hard to tell what it is.The colors used are nice and cohesive.
What about rodents????!!! I agree with the comments that it is kind of whimsical rather than really scary. (but still think the shirt is cute) I think the boxes around each fear should be eliminated so that they can slightly overlap eachother. I also don't get the food thing.
looks good! I like how some of the images are separated by boxes... its a strong and solid graphic all together. Maybe on the back you should list the fears?
Becca,
ReplyDeleteReally great work, and very cool concept. Thanks for the shark shout out - definitely a "real fear!"
The one issue I have is that some of the images you chose dont flow - a few are hand-drawn, with a purposeful goofy style. However, a few others have clean lines and look more like expertly crafted graphics. I think if you went with all of one or the other, you'd be spot on!
Good luck.
some of the drawings feel a little too cartoony which i think kind of takes away from the fear concept
ReplyDeleteI like it!! I am not at all bothered by the mixture of hand-drawing and sophisticated graphics -- I think it adds interest. The only graphic that I don't get is the food (fear prompted by continuing changes on what foods are safe/good for you?) I especially like the colors.
ReplyDeleteMy only suggestion is that you put the title of the work either on front at top or on the back of the shirt (probably back)to give context.
i like it. i think it came out nice! the hand-drawing makes it a bit whimsical, which works well for a tshirt. perhaps putting 'fears 101' on the bottom in a large creepy-looking font would bring it all together.
ReplyDeleteWonderful & whimiscal! I just don't get the food on the bottom right. Everything else is terrific!!
ReplyDeleteI like it! I do think it would add something though if you put on the title because with such random categories it can be hard to tell what it is.The colors used are nice and cohesive.
ReplyDeleteWhat about rodents????!!! I agree with the comments that it is kind of whimsical rather than really scary. (but still think the shirt is cute) I think the boxes around each fear should be eliminated so that they can slightly overlap eachother. I also don't get the food thing.
ReplyDeletelooks good! I like how some of the images are separated by boxes... its a strong and solid graphic all together. Maybe on the back you should list the fears?
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