Hi Everyone...after taking all of your feedback into consideration, I have come up with a final design!!! Please check it out and let me know what you think! Thanks so much for all of your comments. Becca
I think you really got most people's fears. I love that you moved the whole bus and shark scene on a hill and made it more obvious. its much more scary. I also love how the oil is falling into the mayo. the only thing i would watch is that you use the same wording, like "get them" kind of thing a lot. and getting into grad schools is only relevant to one demographic. but if that was the point, then i love it! i think its awesome!!! you're amazing!
I think you really got most people's fears. I love that you moved the whole bus and shark scene on a hill and made it more obvious. its much more scary. I also love how the oil is falling into the mayo. the only thing i would watch is that you use the same wording, like "get them" kind of thing a lot. and getting into grad schools is only relevant to one demographic. but if that was the point, then i love it! i think its awesome!!! you're amazing!
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ReplyDeleteIt's great and creative. Really can't say that you are missing any element to make this better.
This is such a great design! So much more cohesive than your first design. My favorite part is the back, really brings it all together. Great work!!
ReplyDeletei really like that the bus is green. I think that was very insightful and creative. good job!
ReplyDeletei love love where you put the shark, this is awesome!
ReplyDeleteI think it's awesome! I can't think of anything to improve it. You are incredibly talented! Where can I get a shirt?!!!
ReplyDeletenice job! good use of colors and the back is cool!
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